Melting Candy

Melting Candy

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Hopes and sweet expectations

Year candy has shed its flab

Now it is a razor sharp sliver

Sawing the tongue with bruises

Soon in five day's time

No candy in the mouth

The sweet taste,scratched

Tongue eagerly waits

For a fresh new candy

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Five Day Candy

 

A kid's dream sweet. But sucking it until it melts down to a slither that cuts the tongue is universal, especially for hard candy. Cool writings these.

 


 

 

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Thank you !!!!

Thank you for letting me read my own post once again Smile


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