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Skipping Stones

So elegant,
so intricate;
I hold my breath,
for fear that the slightest
exhalation will disturb
the remains of this pyre,
alter the ashes
of my memories,
or disturb the delicacy,
the intimacy,
that kindles your words
within the fabric of my soul,
so gracefully,
and eternally.

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Miss you!!! Hurry back Dear!!! ;-)

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ashes_theartofburning's picture

For you. <3

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/ashes_twisted/poem/952042


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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A gorgeous sentiment! Love

A gorgeous sentiment! Love love love it! :D you ssmoothie lol! It's perfect! You got it down so beautifully, the description the delicate and sensuousness way she writes and our awe at the tapestry of words she crafts in our minds! Well matched bravo! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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;-)

Thank you Dear!!! Ashes is amazing!!!

running_with_rabbits's picture

if you don't breath you will

if you don't breath you will be dead before she returns :P


Much Love

Ashley

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I'll keep breathing, I

I'll keep breathing, I promise ;-) besides, you've already taught me about making myself dizzy ;-D

running_with_rabbits's picture

;)

;)


Much Love

Ashley

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Love this Beavis!

Love this Beavis!


Copyright © morningglory

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;-)

Thanks HW!

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Memory As Ashes Altared

The composition was nicely penned. The depth? Deep indeed. From the heart. May the missing return soon. ~~A~~


 

 

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;-)

Many thanks, Lady A!