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Sunrise at Twilight
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30 years in a Hole Welcome to Twilight.
Twenty bucks covers it.
A fuck, a suck,
A little something for your head?
Pay and stay, or go.
Welcome to the Twilight.
Welcome to paradise?
Whatever you need.
There's something here,
to change your priorities;
no more worries,
no regrets,
only twenty dollars,
the price to forget...
I picture an old time
I picture an old time vaudeville like show.......almost scary or nightmarish, but in a whimsical way.
I do like my whimsy.
Interesting. Thanks!
Interesting. Thanks!
I want to go to The Twilight,
I want to go to The Twilight, but don't have $20 to spare. Much to forget, much to remember. The idea that my mind is erasable, just may be my new fantasy. Wipe it all clean, all of it.
Ahh, but there are so many
Ahh, but there are so many hidden fees at the Twilight...let me conjure up another destination ;-)
:( your comment makes me want
:( your comment makes me want to hug you and tell you it will all be ok, even if I think I may be lying :(
Much Love
Ashley
again I say BEAVIS I LOVE
again I say BEAVIS I LOVE YOU! seriously you put out like one poem for every 100 of mine and it is better then all 100 added up! you are brilliant my dear just brilliant!
Much Love
Ashley
Thank you, but Rabbit my
Thank you, but Rabbit my dear, reading your work is like sitting in a jazz bar all night, staring into the eyes of the singer as she sings soulful songs, knowing they are not for you, but feeling each one touch your soul forever. I wish I could connect the way you do! You are amazing!
wow Beavis I do not know what
wow Beavis I do not know what to say but I am all butterflies :) that complement was like Edgar Allen Poe telling someone they are creepy, it's too flattering coming from you my dear! I feel honored that you view my work this way.
Much Love
Ashley
;-)
I love all your poems, but to me "Maybe it was the Onion" is one of the most beautiful and soulful poems ever posted by anyone on this site. I had to bookmark that one!
wow thank you :)
wow thank you :)
Much Love
Ashley
Fricken Brilliant!!!
unbelievable talent! perfect flow. this one certainly does blow- blow your mind at all this hidden gold!!! I am seriously impressed!!! I cant believe that this masterpiece so full of disapointment and rue and disbelief at the sorry state of affairs was written so well, it really takes the reader in to not only your psyche as an observer but as a participant. I wanted to swear how awsome this is but any more than fricken would have disrespected the pure art in these words fallen on the paige in orderly fashion to create such an emotive piece there is so much I could say but... for now I just want to sit here and re read and absorb it all in. I am blown away! congratulations Hugss. oh there is a second and in pay and stay that needs deleting other than that it is perfect!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the creative push!