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Brittle patrons of life,
surrounded, yet solitary,
longing for ever elusive relevance;
spying, through self-deluding cataracts
for honest emotion
to despoil.
They shatter
and contract
gracelessly
into
grains
of
sand.

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©6 November 2011 - 8:20am — Beavis
29 December 2011 - 4:53am — SSmoothie
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Wow! I see it so much clearer

Wow! I see it so much clearer now!!! Awsome!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

27 December 2011 - 2:55am — running_with_rabbits
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I really enjoyed the ending

I really enjoyed the ending

Much Love

Ashley

10 December 2011 - 3:57pm — Hgaut810
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Wow

Sir, you are very very talented. Love it.

12 December 2011 - 1:00am — Beavis
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Thanks!

Thanks!

13 November 2011 - 9:13pm — humanpulse
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I enjoyed reading this one.

I enjoyed reading this one. Deep thinking. Brief yet, has high density of meanings. Well written friend.

14 October 2012 - 9:07pm — allets
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Short Subject

Big impact! - Nice to reduce envy to a grain of sand, making it smaller and maller - Exquisite! - Lady A

 

 

16 October 2012 - 3:02pm — Beavis
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Thanks Lady A!

An early effort at "distilling" ;-)