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I feel empty

Like i'm missing something

But whenever I look for it

I can't find it,nothing



I'm an empty shell

Just a moving body

Losing his life slowly

Nobody wants me



I could complain forever

But that wouldn't get me anywhere

I could just give it all up

Could I do that,would I dare



Could I slice my arm

Just to watch it bleed

To see if there is a worse pain

And find that something I need



Maybe I should try to lose this feeling

But I have,i've tried so much

But I cant get to the place away from this feeling

That place I cannot touch



I could forget about life

Could I live though this pain I can't hide

I don't think I can make it

I don't think i'll survive

Author's Notes/Comments: 

...this is how I feel when I make someone mad on accident.  I feel worthless when I know that no matter how much I apologize it wont do anything for me.  I also have felt like this for no reason every now and then(this being on of those times).

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:01am
©10 November 2004 - 2:32am — beautifulpain
1 March 2005 - 6:25pm — Abbie Porcello (not verified)
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i like this poem and i know how you feel... trust me. but if one person is mad at you, you still have a lot of other friends that would be soooo upset if you did do anything. just look at it that way, even if it is your best friend that gets mad at you, it will eventually blow over. good poem though

11 November 2004 - 7:57pm — Ruby (not verified)
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"Could I slice my arm
Just to watch it bleed
To see if there is a worse pain
And find that something I need"

No. Im not letting you ... and why ar eyou in pain love?

10 November 2004 - 1:15pm — Eddie Doyle (not verified)
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liked the poem but my poem ( yes i will awnsar) ...

but ...
later...
i have an awnsar but ...
i wont post it ...
see ya later.