Unknown

A journey to the land of unknown

All colors and familiar faces

But no one that is recognizable

You breathe in the sand

Feel the roar of the desert

Soon there will be light

While I sleep in the secure arms of a man

Holding him tight with no strings attached

Hoping this night was endless

In the land of unknown.

 

~bani

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Nice write...wipe the drool

Nice write...wipe the drool from your chin please'


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umm thanks

thanks. uhmm..I didnt quite get that..

 

~bani


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Sand Breathing

"...you breathe in the sand..." ( I tend to see words and their meaning in layers - examples: sands of time, walking on the beach and "taking in visually" the sandscape, time as in an hourglass, taking in every bit of the sensed terrain) A fine line - Unknown is a nice land apparently :D ~Star~

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thank you stella!!

:).... lovely observations...

 

~bani


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