Earrings and Cameras ..... 12July05

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compelling

bodies pressed together

in a world

where the truth is outlined in polka dots

your green eyes

what it feels like to be in love

I want your lips

how else do I say...

little things you do

how can I describe...?

hidden backwards

glances

gazing for moments

look away in an instant

am I... obvious?

who has freckles like yours?

would they rub off if we were to touch...?

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Caitlyn Manzanilla's picture

Hello!

I'd like to say your poem is pretty good, omitting grammatical tendencies. I liked it, but I felt like you kind of hung off at the end. Is there a Part II poem?

Robert C Millar's picture

Like it