I told you so

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2009

 

I told you so
When we were young and nieve and happy
I told you so
When we were old and hurt and angry
I told you so when you kissed her
I told you so when you left her
I have told you so since the dawn of time
We are no good for each other
We can only do harm
And I have ALWAYS  told you so

 

 

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Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

really love the first 4 lines. the comparison shows exactly the direction that the prose is going in,and it's honest because youreally did say it all along lol, i didn't realize till the end that this one was so recent, and once i did it hat me harder lol. Good job


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