Tables turned

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2002

You chill me to the bone with your touches made of stone

You pretend you care but I know who lies there

You really should learn just how the tables turn

When I chill you to the bone with my touches made of stone



My how the tables turn

Author's Notes/Comments: 

AH HA bit yourself in the ass now didn't ya!(ohh wait that sounded mean :( )

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Clinton Mallett's picture

Good, very good I only have one sugestion change the format to something like this...

You chill me to the bone
With your touches made of stone

You pretend you care
But I know who lies there

You really should learn
Just how the tables turn

When I chill you to the bone
With my touches made of stone

Just makes itlook nice... please if you would i'd like you to look over my work and critique it if you can spare the time if not no biggy
keep up the good work,
Just Some Punk

Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

bit yourslf in the ass eh?
Why does that completely figure to me, everyone has a really bad habit of doing that around you
nikki


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Vicki D's picture

very interesting! and amusing lol :)like

love ya always
vicki