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Servant Savior Sacrifice
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Love Speak to me
In poetic words
Touch me
As if addicted to my skin
I feel as if I am falling
Slipping
Into a dream
Something inside of me is awakened
Lust for me
Love only me
Liberate my heart
Come to me in darkness
Disguised in light
Haunt me
My Fantasy
Close your eyes
As you slip deep inside of me
I have your heart your soul
You love me alone
Possess my mind
Take over
Control me
The more you think
You have me under you
The more I control you
I become the servant savior sacrifice
Can we learn
new ways to visualize? One feature that distinguishes one poem from another is the "voice" or sense of a person providing the vision and guiding the readers eyes and ears through the moment... I can imagine various members of your audience responding to these words in very different ways...
I find that poetry is a wonderful media for individuals to express themselves, and to begin a journey of exploration and discovery. The poet is always free and is ultimately giving exposure to their real persona.
You are a very talented poet. I encourage you to continue your avocation...
Stay safe
Be happy
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot