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English poetry tell me how can a place so sweet
decides the path before your feet
a place that, for you, will choose
whether you win
or whether you lose
trapped inside a little cage
wanting to get out
for you are so full of rage
yet you cannot help but notice
the beauty inside the cage
the bars are wrapped in flowers
begging you to stay
beautiful and welcoming
but you want to leave
you want to explore
what the world has for you to see
Your are not complaining
but you are just saying
letting it know
that you are not staying
wanting to see what it's like in a city
you are always held back by a beautiful Italy.
Diggin' the way you managed
Diggin' the way you managed to write deeply while keeping it simple, lovely.
Thank you! I didn't want to
Thank you! I didn't want to go so deep but I didn't want to make Italia seem so simple either. I saw that you are from Texas. What is it like there? I have heard of Louisiana, is it like that?
-il mondo è così bello quando si smascherare tutto il male che si nasconde sotto
Very good meter and rhyming
Very good meter and rhyming with the first two lines...
Cheers,
Adam_San
replace 'Italy' with 'Canada'
replace 'Italy' with 'Canada' and you took the words from my mouth love :)
you should come join me in Ireland, it was a long flight and I am insane for coming but it was so worth it!
Much Love
Ashley
You have see Ireland? That is
You have see Ireland? That is stupefacente! That is amazing! I have only seen France and Spain. oh how I wish I could. My fiance and I are waiting for a great chance to go and see another country. I want to go see America.
-il mondo è così bello quando si smascherare tutto il male che si nasconde sotto
America is boring go see
America is boring go see Canada its amazing! the Rockies are beautiful
Much Love
Ashley
My fiance and I want to go
My fiance and I want to go see the nature in America not just the cities. I have heard too many boring things about the cities in America. If i do go to a citie I would like to go see a place of festivities and beautiful nature. I think Louisiana sounds like a fun place. facethetruth 2b has made it sound like a fun place. I would love to see Niagra Falls! what exactly is your Niagra Falls though?
-il mondo è così bello quando si smascherare tutto il male che si nasconde sotto
Grand Canyon is One Place in
Grand Canyon is One Place in America I would love to see , and yes no one Parties like NEW ORLEANS , But america does offer beautiful places of nature hope you can come soon .....
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
yea I had a friend visit the
yea I had a friend visit the grand cannon and he said it was amazing
Much Love
Ashley
Grand canyon full of untold
Grand canyon full of untold stories and history . Just to see a breath taking view such as the Grand Canyon would be wonderful about now ....
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
I have tried my best to
I have tried my best to translate the poem. It is under folder English poetry. Some of its honesty and words are lost in translation but I hope you can all understand the feeling I have when I bake at my shop.
-il mondo è così bello quando si smascherare tutto il male che si nasconde sotto
Do you have something or a
Do you have something or a device that could translate my Italian poem? If not I could translate for you.
-il mondo è così bello quando si smascherare tutto il male che si nasconde sotto
I do not beleive I do if you
I do not beleive I do if you would not mind translateing that woulde be great ......
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
Copy paste into google tool
Google translate ;) there are others like worldlingo too!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thanks I will for sure use the site
for now on their are some I would love to read on here but in differant translations ....
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
Great job on your second
Great job on your second english poem , wishi could read the other ..I feel like you about leaving I want to leave Louisiana but seems like I always get held back ... Keep trying and one day you will... But do stay true ....
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
Stay true to your roots. This
Stay true to your roots. This poem is great.