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The sunset's breeze,

The clear blue sky,

A moment to seize,

If only you were by...



I'm all alone on vacation,

All alone without you.

I have this weird sensation,

Do you too?



Beauty in Paradise,

I know this sin't true,

The happiness is all lies,

Because all i want is you!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem when i was on vacation in California. The poem is pretty straight foward. I was sad and alone without her. De ja voo...
Well, we aren't going out anymore. But ironically enough i still love her.  

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 1:15am
©21 October 2003 - 11:59pm — aphantom
16 March 2004 - 8:24pm — poetvg
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i like this poem

26 November 2003 - 5:40pm — Diana Rosenberg (not verified)
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good poem... I really like it... I know how it feels to be in love and have your heart shatered, but it eventually goes away... and your love for her will fade.