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As you laid dying on the floor

A soul creeping, throat scouring, maddening

Scream crept out my throat 

Ripping the air like flesh torn asunder

And that was all.

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Truth or Drama

Whichever, the elements of a good short story or playette are present and felt - nice ~~A~~