Is it over

You’ve been on my mind

I’m trying to let it go

See what I can find

Even though I don’t know

Burning bridges trying to be free

Make me believe that we are free

Trying to find something as incredible as you

The high that you made me feel when you touched me

 

Is it over, can it be over

View angelofdarkness's Full Portfolio
a.griffiths57's picture

    Lovely memories of a

 

 

Lovely memories of a relationship that did not last the course, and still arousing desire for your loved one. Your poem has a good reminiscing quality about it, that I like very much. 


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

AngelofDarkness's picture

Thank you

Thank you I was going for something that would have others see and kind of understand what I was feeling and saw through my memories of the relationship.


Angel of Darkness