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Come Bathe With The Angels

Come bathe with the angels

And wash away sin

And drift along dreamers

And know where they've been

And dance among lovers

That know not the way

And lose yourself flying

Through the rest of your days

And where are those angels

Who's beauty does blind

And cause such confusion

That tangles your mind?

Bathe with the angels

In clouds above nine

And forget that you're human

And feel so alive.

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©8 March 2003 - 8:11am — andshedied
20 July 2004 - 3:41pm — poetvg
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awesome work
on this poem

2 July 2005 - 7:41pm — Abbie Porcello (not verified)
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wow that is a really good poem! it is really beautiful

2 May 2003 - 5:00pm — Anony Moose (not verified)
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this is very beautiful
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8 April 2003 - 4:23pm — vjochum
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Beautiful beautiful beautiful! Glad I bathed with your angels today.
Valerie Jochum

9 March 2003 - 5:39pm — tsagoi
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This is amazing Rachael.

8 March 2003 - 5:47pm — David Richardson (not verified)
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Rachael:
This poem is so beautifully written with so much feeling and true emotions. I truly love this poem. Please continue writing gems like these and will check your hall periodically to be inspired for sure. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with me and have a very beautiful weekend.

Regards,
Dave Richardson
3/07/2003