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Give them sacrosanctity
Oh, I've lost a cherished bloomy paradise,
So discharged by superfluous sacrifice ;
No return again to dreary previous pages;
That degrades your mind but also still engages.
Hey, stand up, you're done with any wrecking fear;
This world is not so black or white as it seems, dear.
How many places could pretend to blow you out
Of drowsy state in which your own spell is loud.
Run across that walley to the sunrise,
Find your upper path, put on a new guise.
Be various and feel mad spirits free to spin,
Take on creating music with your violin.
Your search will lead you up to the eluding essence,
Evolve your soul and keep your heart for wisdom's lessons.
Run faster, don't forget to make a stop for rumination;
Don't judge yourself too strictly, gift a chance of exculpation.
Just dance and tell the others: may your life be good,
No matter if that time you'll be misunderstood.
Eternity's the one sufficient quantity,
Take care of wonders, give them sacrosanctity.
What an excellent poem with
What an excellent poem with which to debut on postpoems! There is a profound wisdom in this poem that far exceeds my words to describe it, and the last stanza of this poem is one of the most powerful that I have read. Welcome to postpoems! With this poem as your debut, you are off to a magnificent start. I look forward to more of your work.
Starward
What a wonderful (a bit
What a wonderful (a bit confusing) comment! So happy to know that this atmosphere of wisdom and power is revealed and you can feel it through the words. Thank you so much!
Freedom is such a bait in others' promises but a precious gift from your own...)
Andrea
Bravo
Masterfully done...with exceptional choice of words.
Much respect
So grateful for your admiring
So grateful for your admiring comment! Thank you so much!
Freedom is such a bait in others' promises but a precious gift from your own...)
Andrea