she sits alone at the bar

she sits alone at the bar

sipping her cosmopolitan

the red drink reflects



sipping her cosmopolitan

she waits for something or nothing

a drunken flush on her cheeks



she waits for something; nothing

extraordinary in appearance

a drunken flush on her cheeks

reflects her soft pink shirt



extraordinary in appearance

the mirror behind her

reflects:  the soft pink shirt

her cigarette burning slowly



the mirror behind her

holds disapproving glances

her cigarette burning slowly

glows a firey red



with a disapproving glance

the bartender pours another drink

glowing a firey Red-

her healing elixer



the bartender pours another drink-

the Red Drink:  Reflect.

her healing elixer-

she sits alone at the bar

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Rose's picture

A very sad undertone, you have painted quite the picture with your use of imagery. I enjoyed the write.

Clay Archer's picture

I see this was posted over a year ago? I think you should post more. I really liked this a lot. Great imagery. I could really feel what you were trying to say. I would continue writing/posting more