I Love You

You may not notice me

But I notice you

I try to control my feelings

But I obsess over you

 

I am extremely loud

But you can't hear a word I say

I love you

But I don't think you feel the same way

 

I'm trying to say I love you

But you just can't see

It's taking a lot of time

For you to understand me

 

If you didn't understand what I am saying

I don't know what to say

I'm giving you love,

But you're just giving it away

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

There is someone who inspired me to write this, but I don't want to say.

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Morningglory's picture

Nice poem. I can relate

Nice poem. I can relate completely. Welcome to PP.


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nightlight1220's picture

Love is meant to be given,

Love is meant to be given, although can often be misplaced by the giver when an expectation of return is present. Beautifully expressed.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "