A Perfect Man Once

 

I met a perfect man once

hanging from a tree

I asked him how he got there

and he said, "Follow me."

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He died and they say he came

back all over the world. That's

a great story to tell children.

I'm still stuck on the "Follow me."

part.

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Prefection has a bad rep

unrecognized when it appears

and makes you wonder

your life entire as you try

to follow and fail.

allets

 

01-04-14

7:24p

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Daniel-59's picture

I tried to follow but the

I tried to follow but the words were just others interpretations of what was said

How is it I should turn the other cheek,When the strong are beating to death the weak ?
I'll beg for forgiveness if it turns out I'm wrong Till then I'll not ask if it's ok to fight for the weaker than Me 

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

allets's picture

The Hebrew Fairy Tale

Is chugged full of bad advice intended as a conditioning device to keep the people dominated by the powerful. Civilizations are constructed on such heiarchies. Most religious text are male hero dominated. Except Hinduism where the female principal is awesome. Still, humility was a life saver in a swords and spears kneeling and bowing to the king culture. I'm waiting to see if Russia is going to turn the other cheek. Russians beg for nothing, certainly not forgiveness. - Just Bein' Lady A

 

 


 

 

nightlight1220's picture

It's something like the

It's something like the perfectly limbless man who learns to swim and ride a bike.

 

The "perfect flaw" explanation doesn't suffice. It's an experience, not a word maybe?

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

allets's picture

Or

The man who complained that he had no hands until he saw a man who had no legs.


 

 

bishu's picture

Very very nice post Respected Madam Allets

Very very nice post Respected Madam Allets.Adorable and profound wisdomy.Just like The Pied Piper of Hamrlyn ... Lovely.


©bishu 

 

allets's picture

Thanks Bish

Holding course, reading, writing prose - thanks for the read