Love As Infinity

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The quiet settles in as surface
reflection, subtle quicksand sinking
takes the breath. Life faulters,
knows there will be no light
again at the end of this entity
once named love.
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There are dust motes, sand grains
numbered on every beach, an
exact number of attached hairs
on the heads of ten people
in a room, and then there is the sum
of the heartbeats in our love song.
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Take a star, any star, calculate
the distance from my emotional state
this hour to the surface of that
star’s best world. A measure here
of sighs at ten per hour of travel
approaches the wonder felt when
you are touching me.
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allets
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9inety's picture

no really

I'm not kidding

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/9inety/poem/988665

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/9inety/folder/900088

 

I don't know about vintage


I'm a whiskey man


but whatever year and  where ever it is that you hail from they are damned lucky that they are in the presence of such talent!!!


Peace

Dylan

 


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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Thanks Dylan

World's Best - I am humbled. Glad you enjoyed the poem - Stella


 

 

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This poem has been added

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THE WORLDS BEST POETRY COPYRIGHT 1904

 

 peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

allets's picture

1904

Was an excellent vintage. Thanks for the read and comment. Just be! - Stella


 

 

q.v.'s picture

Not surprised

I am not surprised that you can astound me to deeply. Your use of metaphor is incredibly deft, and never (to my knolwdge) takes a false step. As a poem, this is one of the finest on postpoems. As a love poem, it brings to the soul the most exquisite resonances.


q.v.

 

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Accepting Praise (humbly)

Exquisite resonances brought to the soul was the purpose...well met, seems, m'lord. I serve, as always, to write to the heart of other poets. To you I wish success! Ka Pla! - Lady A


 

 

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Beautiful! Joyous a

Beautiful! Joyous a delightful treat!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

I Had To Write A Lovesong

Thank you.


 

 

Astral_Tides's picture

Wow Lady A.. what a beautiful

Wow Lady A.. what a beautiful writing.
That last stanza is one for the ages.
Simply one of the most breath-taking stanzas ever to exist I am quite sure.
Love as infinity, is a potentially infinite scope of hopes and dreams.
Love.. one of the few ultimate transcenders of all known and un-know reality and mystery.


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 


 

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Breathless

I'm not sure it is quite all that, but thanks. It sounds like you really enjoyed this one...I hadn't written a love poem in a while, thought I'd give it an unleashing and hit paydirt! - Be well - Lady A

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Love floats on astral tides
as if the world was flat
and the tides stopped
for a star about to leap
then, rethinking the spaces,
she falls into the pond
and, holding her breath,
she floats.