The Shit Kick

 

The location and action in two words
profane as hell, hellish as the distinction
between fucking and love making. When
the time screams and the place howls
mercy over fuck you like phraseologies,
then it is time to reflect on the uses
of language.

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Who needs dictionary lore when
the ejaculation is so very clear, clean
of deceit, a bit less than pure, as always,
but the directions are perfectly placed
and the screaming is not so bad, really.
Out of you the shit is kicked, oh my.
The recipient regrets having said
shove it, sincerely.

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Raise the foot like the voice and let
fly. Make sure the opponent has
forgotten to put on his body armor
chin to toe, muster strength, center it
in the leg, bend slightly, aim, then
let ‘er rip.

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Kick ass, ass whoopin’ with
antagonisms asleeve, aboot, or
asock, just do what must to be
sung about later. I give you
the shit kick, perfect in place, space,
with no trace of hesitation. Foul
mouthed, you get the point across
so quckly. No way to dodge the
inevitable. Everybody else duck. Here
it comes.

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...a

09-20-12

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

Some poems just resonate! ~S~
 

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and_hera_met_zeus's picture

Wow stella!

i didn’t know you had this in you :) it’s nice to juxtapose this against your other works because it shows your range.  :D

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Range Of The Poet

No topic or theme is safe. This is among my most read poems. Spiffy title, I wanna mean :D slc



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Beavis's picture

Love it!

Love it! And if the language serves the purpose and the ART of the poem, nothing is off the table. Sometimes, we need to squirm at little, but from the power of the piece, not the screech of the words as they were fingernails on a chalkboard. Good write and good point Lady A!

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Eardrums rebel at such screeching on blackboards u no

Precisely! If the vocabulary chosen fits the context, suits the need of the emotions presented, then yes and thank you Beavis One for your support for this deviation for me from being soooooo straight all the tme. I learn from the masters at PostPoems.org always~~~Lady A~~~



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words..and WTF?

There are 2 words that I wish we could do away with, even "poetically speaking"... "b" and "n". because of the history and meaning of both, we can rant, write and emote quite well without either... on the other hand Fuck, is and should be in wild and wide use. I mean, what the hell are we allowing when drones kick the shit out of people over and over again.. shouldn't we say WTF, loudly and in the streets. which of course can be very poetic. Of course any word can be over used, become useless. your "shit kick" poem does exactly that, it kicks ass and in such a classy was as well...

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WTF and Art

Scholars have only skimmed the surface on these great questions of our times. WTF will be the only surviving words etched into the gray rock of a cave after the last war of wars and the survivors, unable to read or write, will wonder: "Now what the fuck does that mean?" - Hi. - Lady A~~~~



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Ahhhahahah!! Yer killing me

Ahhhahahah!! Yer killing me with this comment.
Sad but true.
But man I love to laugh. Freakin awesome!!
OMFG ROLFLMFAO WTF! PST TTYL ; P


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 

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Ignorance May Be Bliss

OMFG Blastphemy....k... ROLFLMFAO (?) PST TTYL ???? I am not that hip yet. Not a chat-ter so I'm lost but thanks for the support and comments alphabet. I'm sure it is profound and very kind. Glad to know you found a chuckle or two. That's good for the digestion u no. Kick whatever you like. Great exercise! - Yours in writing, Lady A



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OMFG ROLFLMFAO WTF! PST TTYL

OMFG ROLFLMFAO WTF! PST TTYL =
Oh my Fucking God (please pardon the blasphemic absurdness)
Rolling on the floor, laughing my fuckking ass off (again.. I feel estranged cursing to a lady)
What the fuck? ( please forgive me)
Please send tell (lets connect more about this privately)
Talk to you later ( I await your future connection)


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 

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Belated Thanks

For the Shit Kick accolades and the alphabetical explanations. I'm so up on stuff, but I missed this and now I feel caught up. Missin' ya, TTYL! 



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Freaking love this! Love the

Freaking love this! Love the title, and hell yeah, guilty as charged!oh and love the play on words and of course the word duck which leaves the reader to rhyme on air saying my favorite rant word.
See what I did there? Lol! Freaking awesome cobweb sweep! Whoooooooooo hoooooooo! Moove miss Ssmooth There a new rantin bitch in town!


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Groovin' at the Post

Just tryin' to keep up with the new language that we inherited from our grandparents who got it from sailors - It's a life's work, Lady A ~~~



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Where the hell did this come

Where the hell did this come from??
I'm literally dying here in laughter Lady A!
Reminiscent of a SSmoothie rant.
Oh my stomach hurts, don't kick me there.
Freaking love this !!!


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 

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Move Over Bruce Lee

I'm old and was getting set in my old fart ways...this was a stretching exercise...a way to get the cobwebs out of the synapes associated with the brain. I have no idea where it came from. Just tryin ta write a little bit o poetry over here...also laughing - Lady A



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