Art of The Dangle

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Vintage Words

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The air is the same air
I breathed yesterday.

I  walked the same floor,
stepped across the
same tile stones
and paved drives
and walkways.

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Yet here the mind, like
my leg, dangles as if
from the side of the bed, 

swinging freely, neither

content nor full of free

flowing blood.

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allets
09-10-12

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I enjoyed this one as

I enjoyed this one as well.

I'll re-think it at 5:30 AM!

:)

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Belated Thanks

You are too kind. Thanks for the read and the comment  :D ~~A~~



Lady A

 

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the things we take note of! I

the things we take note of! I have a whole folder on observations... but none so intense as this delightfully packed piece! lovely! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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In All Humility

Thank you so much, cuplet - A



Lady A

 

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You're welcome diallet ;)

You're welcome diallet ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Belatedly

U rock! :D slc



Lady A