a moon sings to Sol

love lyrics

a prelude to dawn.



heat waves to a blue moon

the hunt begins

for elusive prey.



rain is a curtain

obscuring Sol

the moon is laughing.



dewed grass

weeps on Sol's cheek

until moonrise.



when moon and sun align

earth looks asleep




a near round sun courts

an oval moon

earth circled circles.




Author's Notes/Comments: 

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Cascade's picture

Quite beautiful...each and

Quite beautiful...each and every one of them!

allets's picture

U R So Kind

Thank you xoxoxo ~S~



Starward's picture

Superb sequence!

Superb sequence!


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Thank You, Starward

Modernist were rhyming nature writers; Post-Them, the edge of sharp conflict and harsher scapes doused with suspicion and omnipresent greed. Mixed, a dissonance rises, an undercurrent that the stars and orbs are misaligned. ~S~



SSmoothie's picture

Such a great take on

Such a great take on something taken for granted. Loved it! You're talking my kind of solar system! Blessings ss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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My Default Position

Nature. Always a certainty. ~S~



patriciajj's picture

Amazing! I want to read again

Amazing! I want to read again and again. I think of such compositions as "savory". You can almost taste the beauty, delicate and silky, simple yet deep. Each image is a hypnotic glimpse of something pure and meaningful seen through the lense of your elegant style. Amazing. 

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Fractured Haiku

Walking around again is all :D