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Hellbound
By your last hour,
he will devour,
all your power,
And just like me,
you will finally see,
what you're going to be,
Despite your hate,
He will create your fate,
and by his will, you reincarnate
Trapped in flames,
You are kept below,
Seconds that seem so slow,
The whispering wind that seems to blow,
All your senses away when it started to grow
Engulfed in darkness,
he sees your soul through your eyes,
every panting breath,
he hears you sigh,
blood tension high,
when your about to lie,
breathing your last breath,
before you die.
Very good. Was very detailed,
Very good. Was very detailed, and really made you see, what you were saying, as if it was a movie playing. Loved this.
-Elfy*
I liked this! But just one
I liked this! But just one gramatical hint: when you wrote "what your going to be" the "your" should be "You're". Keep writting!!
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