Is my life a lie

this feeling i feel is over bareing,
my heart plummets into the deep.
should i not be careing.
the fall is so very steep,
maybe i am just daring,
is it me or does my future look bleak,
I try so hard but everyone sees it as meek,
will i ever find what I seek.
I feel terror every where i go,
but try not to let it show,
i hide it from the people around me,
but i know they can see.
help me I plead,
someone please help me succeed,
I hold all of my feelings inside,
it makes me feel i've already died.

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WildHorseNikki's picture


it was very good. i loved it. and i hope that is not how u really feel.

Black Beauty

JAP's picture

this is a storng feeling poem

this is a storng feeling poem nice job