Sweet Moment


sweet moment, listing gently;

bringing life into every corner of my heart

not on purpose, hardly meaning

to change forever every shade and every hue

there's something different

something better

something that i never thought existed

shining from your heart and through your eyes

all at once kind and real and wise

making me wish that this could last

i left a mark to find the way

back to that moment, to that day

it's the moment i first felt

that all could be so clear and precious

that i could have what every soul desires


that sweet moment


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Here today, gone tomorrow ... yada yada ...

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Jenn Hamilton's picture

Hmm... another good tone change. May I suggest "something true", rather than "something nice"? Nice can be such an insipid word....