Silent Underwater Waves

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Silent underwater waves
shadowed light made deep blue
a liquid sky of lighter hue
an ever distant surface.
Weightless in this water,
it is simply you,
the endless deep,
and your diving gear.

You would have sighed
at such a sight
if only that were possible
breathing in mechanically
[a slow, steady breath of air]
and breathing out
you blow bubbles
to that ever distant surface...

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indigo_kid007's picture

can I?

"a liquid sky of lighter hue" Do you think I could use this line some time?? It gives me a crazy idea.


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Adam아담's picture

Sure thing, Indigo ^__^

Let me know when its written, I'd be interested in what you came up with. If you don't mind, though, could you reference it in the author's notes?


Cheers,
Adam_San

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:)

so nice...i'm guessing this is from your diving trip... because of your depiction in your poem

Adam아담's picture

Thanks P.P.

Actually, I wasn't even able to get certified yet, as "asthma is a contraindication to diving..."so I'd be a liability to safety :P


Cheers,
Adam_San

thisisme789's picture

Wow! That's really pretty! =)

Wow! That's really pretty! =)


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Moriah:

Thanks :)


Cheers,
Adam_San

thisisme789's picture

Adam:

You're soooo welcome =D


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