across her verses

Folder: 
Hyacinth garden

 

As she wondered if all intellect is like tarnished silver

 

under moonlight

 

an unimaginative moonlight


on the bay where the waves
swiftly hiss

 

out of the bubbles
in the swirls of the foam

while visions arise

in her offering

with dreams of a lost lover


crystalline light shatters in play

she wonders, might she be born of the rain?

 

now, the water falls across her verses

they are falling like tears
stirred by the poems of passing

 

but was this a mistake

did she completely miss the

meaning of the words?

 

one feeling that filled her heart

one that grew stronger

and stronger

in her soul

 

the perceptible, the real, the only truth,

was the view from her eyes

 

eyes that articulated a temptation of the feelings in her hands

 

there was perfect ecstasy within her pose

 

and she wondered if she died right at that moment

 

would she appear, as poetry or prose

 

 

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a.griffiths57's picture

    To give life to creative

 

 

To give life to creative thoughts and ideas is wonderful, like your poem here. 


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

9inety's picture

thank you

both, A. G. and Healing. I try too invoke the readers to envision a scene that they will have some connection.

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

Morningglory's picture

Interesting.... I liked it.

Interesting.... I liked it. Loved the ending. :)


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