my scribbles in winter

wax poetic

these are my scribbles in winter
these themes in text

some may say
I waste my
toasts
at a happy new year


I love my celebrations

 

I do not like the cold 

I am too old

 

but none the less

allusion
forms

to
forge
my style


scrawls wicked in
consequence

 

just another cold hearted mess
as white emptiness gnaws

it conceals

a hunger that stretches for light years

sharp teeth of cold

glacial harshness and whipping snow
behind me is death as he smiles

 

listen to the winds angry voice

hidden by the white out

muffled by inches piling up
echoes only eerily

as the slush sucks at my boots


I struggle to find my worth
no escape from this condition
only broken willow’s in this frozen pain

as this inescapable cold slaps me in my face with more insults

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a.griffiths57's picture

    Lovely write; great

 

 

Lovely write; great writing and descriptions. You make the reader truly aware of your feelings and environment. Heres hoping you have a short Winter, some respite from the pierecing cold there.


 

 

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bishu's picture

Every word seems to be carved from your own soul and body Mr 9in

Every word seems to be carved from your own soul and body Mr 9inety. Each word seems to be carved from your own feelings.The flow is like smooth melted warm butter stream spreading aroma. Truly Mr Dylan you know how to express feelings.I feel cold and frigid at 20 deg Celsius !!! Please accept my respects,regards and best wishes for 2014 ~ Your~fan~from~very~far


©bishu 

 

SSmoothie's picture

Fucking brilliant!!! Oh I am

Fucking brilliant!!! Oh I am itching to sprout words of advice but we all love what we make in our spirals of love and denials... I think you are one ACE writer. love all your works. hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

9inety's picture

thank you

I think you are one ACE writer too

You seek truth and when you find it you lay it all on the the line.

The most admirable of all poets is the poet who will believe in truth...

keep the faith

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot