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a crescent sorrow
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Astronomical Poetry
listen as
shadow voices flutter
hear the moon rise mutter
while starlight glimmer’s stutter
view this vista beyond its lonely incarceration
with stolen eyes
from solitudes alteration
a shroud from a cloud
in the deep
darkness
invisibly
entraps
the eclipsing
within night wind's a final legacy
there is a crescent sorrow
as chaos howls its fury
You have the ability to use
You have the ability to use many styles. The broken up lines add to the dramatic.
Crescent Sorrow
A realy good descriptive poem of night astrology and the poets vision.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
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Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Celestial music is enchanting Sir Dylan
May I have the audacity to comment Sir. I write without your permission.Please excuse me .Celestial music is enchanting Sir Dylan .You are one of the gifted few who can hear them ! The weather also speaks its own tongue free from language or dialect barrier which everyone understands. So nice & sparklingly clear idea. Kudos Sir Dylan (9inety)
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dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot