still paying my dues

If I had my way I'd go to see Buddy Guy play guitar

but he ain't playing no gigs at my favorite bar

got some whiskey drinking blues

damn, if I ain't still paying my dues

got caught in the storm

as I head back to the shotgun shack at least it is warm

so, I enjoyed the rain
though passing

with my pain
it lingers
and took a big bite of my brain  
where Main intersects Hi-way #34

I hear the thunder and the roar

broken down storefront with dead neon night

a car speeds to make the light

hits a puddle near the sidewalk

interrupts my inner talk

and water splashes up on my shoes

this adds to the grays and the blues

with more water up to my face

I guess I know my place

better pick up my pace

thankfully this day is almost done
New Jersey and I wonder what will become of Autumn

I hope these commuters find meaning in the ashes to ashes, and the dust to dust

because, I have little patience for them anymore, and even less trust

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KindredSpirit's picture

mrpoofs is right

I had to read it with Attitude.

When someone writes something

A person reading may not know the cadence.

When I read my poems

I know how to read them.

But that can change too.

The cadence can change in my poems

Which you poets already know

Because it can change in yours

Also.

KS

mrpoofs's picture

Dude. this is awesome. Make

Dude. this is awesome. Make this a blues song and why would pay so much money for it.