Read Me

I wish that you could read my mind.

Could breath my breath.

See through my eyes.

 

I wonder Love... what would you see?

To see yourself,

Except through me.

 

What would you find?

How would it be?

If you could read my mind.

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palewingedpoetess's picture

Gordon lightfoot asked this same question in his song .......

'If You Could Read My Mind' it goes if you could read my mind love what  a tale my thoughts could tell just like an old time movie about a ghost from a wishing well in a castle dark or a fortress strong with chains upon my feet............. If you don't know it already go to youtube and give it a listen. Your poem reminded me so much of that song. Very sweet. Thanks for sharing. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.

TheShadowKnows's picture

WOW

Ive never heard this song before how crazy is this!?!?! Very cool... makes me feel a little less like an amature

sweetwater's picture

It's such a joy to read your

It's such a joy to read your work, I love the way each word bids you to read the next and the next, and before you know where you are you've reached the end, and wished it would go on for longer.