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Amanda Antiques

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These are the lyrics to a new song I'm working. I would love any kind of feedback so I know that what I'm trying to convey is getting across. 

To Paddle One's Canoe Over Still Waters (A Poem About Fictitious Love Stories)

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Reedited on 11.23.2019 (I have supplanted the {minor misspelling of "light year"} but this time, I think I have added a period as its resulting emendation, due to a possible lack of it which was previously left unnoticed).

 

 

This is a repost from my Twitter platform & which has been edited for a very minor misspelling of "light year".  I have corrected the two-word noun.  For anything else that I might have edited (e.g., I might have also missed), that could only be involving a tweaking of the form (e.g., which might have been changed/affected by my copying & pasting method of the verses; either that or other copyediting stuff like by changing fonts/font sizes).  Thank you for checking it out.

The Gorge

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Second poem, hope its alright to read as I know it was good to write it!

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