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What is That

What is that?

That thing in my upper left chest.

I Feel a Void there.

Empty yet filled to the brim with something.

Something that I cant put my finger on.

Something that is Warm and intangable.

And that something that feels like its contained yet bursting out wards in all directions and yet pulling back inwards.

I feel it taking the air out of my throat and slowly replacing it with a warm heavy air.

So hard to breath yet I don’t feel like I’m suffocating.

Everything around me feels so hot and warm.

And in my head I hear a beautiful piano melody.

I think I like it but it feels awkward.

What is this?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

1st draft. Im open to any Criticism

The paino i hear http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFl2AB9-T5c&list=PL2791BFA3108714DD&featu...

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