This beautiful sonnet is: This beautiful sonnet is excellent, and the rhymes you deploy are excellent. I especially like the way, in the first stanza, that "lies" changes both its grammatical structure and meaning. That is exquisitely subtle and also very highly skilled.
Wow! Double: Wow! Double WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the finest---and I do mean the FINEST---poems I have ever read on this site! The skill with which you deploy the parish metaphor is breathtakingly EXCELLENT. I am overwhelmed by your accomplishment. This one of the most important poems on this whole site.
Thank you very much for: Thank you very much for visiting the poem and for commenting. I realize you are pressed for time right now, and I am very grateful that you made a time in your busy day to stop by.
Excellent metaphor, presented: Excellent metaphor, presented in the most succinct and powerful format. This, to me, hearkens back to the greatest of the Greek epigrammatists.
You should try it more than: You should try it more than once. It works! The way you slipped the rhyme and rhythm into this little ember of playful seduction was sly and elegant. It a delight to read you after all this time. Rest assured that my absence is due to pressing obligations and not for lack of interest in this crucial series.
Keep penning artistry and the magnificence of love.
A share and not a right nor: A share and not a right nor an entitlement based on our innate worth for belabouring Paul's summation are as filthy rags and rubbish and dung! Quite inspiring and beneficial for the soul
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