I guess prayer helps as much: I guess prayer helps as much as it helps me i felt you describe me except when I pray. This is a very astute poem and takes the reader there in the trying. The energy and the frustration it takes to wade through every unthought thought or ideas you come upon as if they are a must need soaking up your time and clarity... so well put together. It just works so well! Hugss
Thank you all.so much made my: Thank you all.so much made my year! Ita been quite tough but I'm just going with it and pushing it along or away gently hopefully I'm winning more than I'm losing hugss
Filled with hope , so: Filled with hope , so luscious smooth and delightful though the start is quite roaring. Only you can twist a poem up this way and leave people in awe every time ! Hugss
The short lines work very: The short lines work very well, and encourage your specialized knack for like ambient abstraction to really cut through, forcing the audience to connect the dots, pondering.
Your comment is so deep that: Your comment is so deep that I am not sure how to respond, except to say thank you. And I agree, poetry especially is all about a soul acknolwedging existence. (And that phrase, in your comment, is one of the most brilliant metaphysical statements that I have ever read.)
Thanks kindly, that makes me: Thanks kindly, that makes me glad to hear; short of a time machine and teleportation device, poetry is the most accessible thing at the moment.
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