chaos theory

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a boggling little eyeball,
at my tiny doorstep hanged..
that mutilated horrifying pupil
lay staring,
as the wooden frame infront banged.

no slight knocking,
my little heart throbbing
to that tremendously petrifying,
dauntingly disturbing,
such a hideous sound..
Bang! bang! it cried,
BANG!BANG!!

Oh,those alien eyes grew large.
fathomlessly deep and dark..
of some gruesome plump monster
breathing her last..
oh,fury in her breath..what fearsome fury in her Breath
she stood in the dripping dark rain..

no bandit,no thief,no swindler
an alien she be must,
for a satellite over her head i see..
Bang!!..she bangs againBang!Bang!!..she bangs...

afeared my self,i hanged in naked qualm
.....dripping water i hear...stripping rain....

enough you scoundrels!!! Enough said!!
that was my mother,
with an umbrella over her head..!!

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Not what I first thought, but

Not what I first thought, but good all the same, the eyeball I don't quite get I'm from another land but I pictured you looking through the peep hole. And I did chuckle at the end, my mothers relationship with me isn't quite the best and if that was her I'd leave a pile of caramel cause she don't like to wait! Thanks enjoyed it.

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