Fruitless is the Journey

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I have feared for the worst
of which to pass
An answer through a search
hoped to be had
Fruitless is the journey
scattered, the path
The yearn all still burning
sick is the wrath
Burned landscapes and treasures
broken beliefs
Sought after pleasures
forgotten since

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Love this. Profound. Your

Love this. Profound. Your words and themes are strong and succinct. Thank you, you also remind me how much I unnecessarily complicate things in my writing. I like your work.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."