PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

Thank you so much for: Thank you so much for understanding and validating my purposes in this poem, and in this series.  A comment from you makes such an encouraging effect, and thus the sequence continues.

Thank you, patricajj (Reedited 05.01.2024 [06:45]): You've once again given definition to what I'm trying to portray, as I myself could not unravel my own poetic language use.  I must state that your comments, which are gracing my page ever since, are way.. phenomenal [to say the least] and totally unexpected (to my own level of understanding).  My mind is like that of a scatterbrain and you seem to keep my thoughts together by your lurid comments that are sort of acting like explainers to me.  My native language is not that good either, but when trying to create these test pieces in English in an internet setting, I seem to really get these often (sort of unspoken puzzlements).  But I am just really baffled about how poetry works (which is why aside from checking back in here to refer back or recheck/review what transpired, I also still find some type of a relief in it, in doing so & in various ways even if just thinking about it, envisioning/thinking it through—than in merely chatting with other people in a type of black and white conversation, if not having an outlet such as this).  (I would not say that I have done my best here, by putting these thoughts about a recent muse/inspiration, but I guess it just flowed out while trying to figure out the most correct words in place of such meaningful imageries transcribed, thoughts manifested in a way.)  As always, in spite of me, thank you.   [—It is really so humbling and remarkable to have been critiqued by you.  I don't know what to say but you got exactly what I'm yearning for in this particular poem.  If "N." in case reads this, she might become so overwhelmed with spontaneous feelings that should surely sink in eventually.  While I do not mean to negate my slow progress, it is also in line with my own assessments of how clearly I have made my thoughts flow out or have demonstrated what I should have had felt in that spur of the moment, in the most honest and candid way I thought could.] G'night.

Cavafy certainly shines: Cavafy certainly shines through here in your majestic and sumptuous poetic sanctum. The atmosphere and the delirious heights of rapture are a powerful combination as well as a worthy tribute to Kaisarion. Well done!

You should learn how to spell: You should learn how to spell "boat."  Also, the boatload that you smell is in your own port, and not Patricia's.  Please do not comment on my poems if you need to insult other poets.  Either comment on the poem, or don't waste my time and space.

Since the theater was empty..: Since the theater was empty. I have no problem with what you and he were doing. If there were others there, please be aware they are not there to watch you and your boyfriend engaging in sexual activity. Please keep the moaning to a minimum. Thank you.

Thank you so much..: Thank you so much for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it!  

I wish I had the time to give: I wish I had the time to give this magnificent achievement the accolades it deserves. I'll just say that you succeeded on every level: the emotional impact, the artistry, Cavafy's delicate thunder and the celestial beauty infused in every word.    Congratulations on this!