[inspired in oart by Constantine Cavafy's poem, "Comes To Rest," trans. by Keeley and Sherrard]
Remember the first day the two of you spent together?
Clad only in "skinny" style jeans, barefoot and shirtless;
unshaven for a couple of days' stubble; you felt, at first, a
little self-conscious about your hirsute torso but that, and
any other prudish inhibiitons or societal expectations failed
when he told you, somewhat shyly (his smile, however, quite
delightedly sincere) how erotically beautiful you were.
Above your young faces the sun, and beneath the soles of
your bare feet, the grass provided an agreeably perfect
venue for those first, tentative handclasps and kisses.
Logical consideration, calculation of disadvantages, and
especially concern for what other might think---all the
analytical processes expected of you in college---are
entirely unimportant; because this urge to be together (and,
later tonight, the time of stars'light, the urge to be naked
together) is proof that Love had chosen to couple the two of
you with as much cosmic precision as any astronomer could wish.
Starward
I wish I had the time to give
I wish I had the time to give this magnificent achievement the accolades it deserves. I'll just say that you succeeded on every level: the emotional impact, the artistry, Cavafy's delicate thunder and the celestial beauty infused in every word.
Congratulations on this!
Thank you so much, my words
Thank you so much, my words cannot fully express my gratitude. First, it's a comment from you, Then you also mentioned Cavafy. I am just bowled over by your kind comment.
Starward