Don’t please surrender,

I’m holding out for you,

Look back, just remember,

The happy times we knew,

It may be hard just now,

It’s not always gonna be,

Don’t be confined forever,

Your mind can set you free.

D.Ullman 2000  ©

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Hello Dawn, I finished reading this little treasure of yours,and i just have to let you know,that i loved the reading, very cool poem, very nice idea! like your style a lot. Best wishes to you. A friend in poetry. Lady