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Moon Speaking
Ocean waves crash angrily,
I sit on the shore,
The moon watches silently
He knows what's in store.
Asking questions he can't answer.
Screaming at the sky.
Demanding relief,
Pleading for reason.
Knowing I had to try.
This is an excellent poem. You tell us about speaking to the moon, who listens silently, but has no answers. Now you need to take it to part 2, so that the Moon can reply why he has no answers. I think you have a great opportunity to capitalize on the foundation you have laid here.
Starward