Bank Full of Secrets

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I'm a bank filled with secrets.
My mind is about to burst open
Like a robbery occurring within it
From everyone depositing their secrets constantly.

The same customer always visit everyday
Just to deposit one secret after another,
But always give me a negative attitude
Like she's about to sue me for no reason.

I show her all my hardworking skills
Like drawing, singing and writing.
She just shoves the desk off
And puts a bag full of it's-all-about-me bullshit on it.

Curiosity circles around my mind
Like children playing musical chairs.
Why haven't I gone bankrupt yet?
I guess this is why bank accountants are constantly unhappy.

She needs to open up another account at a different bank
Because I'm about to reveal every secret
And let the world know what a fake bitch she is.
She's taking up all the space in the safe.

Ladies and gentlemen,
This bank will be closing shortly.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The bitch I'm talking about is my ex-best friend btw

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RoC's picture

I know how you feel

I am still a compendium of dirty little secrets from people I'll never speak to again.

But my bank, instead of closing, being robbed, or being emptied, is simply barred shut.

Excellent write.


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SSmoothie's picture

Great rant! Love love love

Great rant! Love love love it! But... Friendships are made of givers and takers just got to find the right balance, you have to stay away for the needy ones they leave you feeling broke on your investments, I'm glad you realised about your friend before its too late, but keep the secrets, don't let your new friend lose trust in you before you even et to know them. Telling secrets is never cool. Weather the storm no matter how many bad things people do I zip it, they tend to tell me too much and worry about me saying this and try to discredit me in fear. But I'm just not like that. I have above all else some integrity I value this above much else! Wonderful write, the emotional bank safe... Ha ha too awesome! HugSS


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MissSaigon's picture

I totally get what you're

I totally get what you're saying, but I never really tell all of the secrets. I just tell the ones to justify the reasons why I'm not friends with that person anymore like saying, "She called me a slut, yet she sucked some guy's dick that she's not even dating" or "She said this (mean thing) about you but she doesn't have the proof to prove her opinion." But, thanks for the tip :)