Seven Sins: Pride

"Look at the pathetic fools."
He looked down at the people.
Rag clothing, dirty hair, filthy skin.
So disgusting, he thought.

3 stories tall houses around him,
He still didn't envy others
Because he was better than them.
Then he walked into his 4 stories tall house.

A throne of a king
Surrounded by money and gold.
Shining and shimmering in his eyes,
The glows began to fade away.

His purple eyes grew wide
And fear began to struck him.
The ground melted and show a reflection.
A reflection of his sin: Pride.

Screams echoed in his chamber of secrets
As no one could enter the place.
Satan's arms grabbed a hold of him
And pulled him into the melted puddle of filthy pride.

Decapitating his head,
Pride's blood splattered all over Hell.
First head for the collection.
Satan's children had to be stopped.

For good.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

10/12/2012

This is the first entry to my poem project Seven Sins. I chose Pride as the first one because it is a common thing that people are nowadays; selfish and proud in a bad way.

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Dang.. you wrote that on my

Dang.. you wrote that on my birthday. :/


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Sorry :/ If it helps, my old

Sorry :/ If it helps, my old high school's mascot is a lion and it meant pride xD Though a lot of kids had bad pride -.- smh

Cleo's picture

I can imagine this as an

I can imagine this as an Anime series...

Pretty Cool :)

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Lol, I might make it into a

Lol, I might make it into a small Manga series :P Thanks for the idea and compliment :)

Cleo's picture

You welcome!! :) Please show

You welcome!! :)

Please show me if you really go through with it!!
I love Anime!!!

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I'm gonna start soon, but

I'm gonna start soon, but delay it for a while since I haven't finished the whole project yet D: And if you want to look at some more anime stuff, you can check out my stuff at http://amiaice.deviantart.com/ :)