As Viewed From Above

Good morning and goodnight my love,

the sky beyond grows black

as the sun dissapears from above



the forest is black as the owl yells,

the field mouse scrurries across a beaten path

a finch slept as the night fell.



radiance leaves sight,

homes nuture darkness

this is the day as it turns into night.



peaceful and alive,

this is the world viewed from above

Good morning and Goodnight my love.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

latest poem as of 10-7-04.
it's something different then what i normally write.. just thought i'd post it and see what you guys think

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I like this one. The wording was great. Keep it up!