A Potters Wheel

So your heart has been

broken time and again



Well i`m the one

that can mend



Put your heart

in the potters hand



I will mend that broken

heart so you can love again



I will write poetry

to you everyday



I will love you

in a special way.



So darling say that

you`ll be mine



And i will love you

till the end of time...

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Judy Costea's picture

Ron,
Very beautiful write.. I love how you used the Potters Wheel and his hands as mending the heart... very good idea.
Peace and Love..
Judy

Karyn Indursky's picture

I enjoyed reading this poem a lot from the visualizations to the emotions to the content to the title. You incorporated all these things wonderfully and it did make one beautiful vase. I saw this poem started out as a lump of clay that you worked until it was ready to go on the potter's wheel as your hands made into a vase to hold the flower of your love to bloom in front of the lady you want to heal from the inside out and turn that tear of heartache into a tear of happiness. In any case, I loved this poem and I hope to read more by you.

Crystal Hecklinger's picture

Wow, so sweet and beautiful....i really love it!
Love
Crystal....p.s. dont stop writting!