Touch me Touch you

 



I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine

and we will be together alway`s

if only in our minds.



Two souls meeting in the night

two wrongs doesn't make a right

but our hearts locked

and our souls entwine.



We danced in the stars  

solace we can find

so forever we will always be

because i touched you

and you touched me ...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is a re write of a poem i wrote 15 years ago

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patriciajj's picture

Just stopping by for a second

Just stopping by for a second read, and the magic hasn't faded: still a lilting, timeless and gracefully crafted pleasure to read and comment on. An ecstatic escape. 

 

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thank you at for the nice

thank you at for the nice review


ron parrish

patriciajj's picture

Hypnotically beautiful,

Hypnotically beautiful, lilting, shimmering and sad, this has all the elements of a memorable love poem. These lines have a truly classic quality: 

 

"We danced in the stars  

solace we can find

so forever we will always be

because i touched you

and you touched me ... "

 

 

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thank you pat,you made it

thank you pat,you made it sound even better


ron parrish

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dance on dance on

dance on dance on

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under the stars for evermore

under the stars for evermore


ron parrish

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This brief reply, which is,

This brief reply, which is, of itself, incredibly beautiful, should be part of the poem as well.  It fits in so well.


Starward

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thank you starward

thank you starward


ron parrish