Maybe

 



Baby !

i knew you,

long ago,maybe in a,

past life,i don` know.

 

maybe ,we was lovers,

lost at sea,

or stranded.on a deserted island,

off the coast of capri.

 

or maybe,

it was just in my mind,

maybe,just maybe

my heart was blind

 

but i smell your perfume,

and feel your soft skin

when the night is dark

my journey begins...

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bishu's picture

Nice read pal

Nice read


©bishu 

 

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thank you mr bishu

thank you mr bishu


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sweetwater's picture

Beautifu. sue.

Beautifu. sue.

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thank`s sue

thank`s sue


ron parrish

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A great way to take a concept

A great way to take a concept of past and memory and make it your own. I applaud the tempo you kept but most of all the differently worded way this was written. Like the perfume and touch taking you back, great job man, truly.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

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thank you for the great

thank you for the great review


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patriciajj's picture

Wistfully romantic, silky and

Wistfully romantic, silky and gently flowing. Lovely work. 

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit


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I can so relate! It's

I can so relate! It's stirring within me again..  great write concise but fully loaded! Well done!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit


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Sometimes in life we meet

Sometimes in life we meet someone that just feels so damn familiar.  It's happened to me. Some people call them twin flames, some, may be soulmates...I do believe everyone we meet can teach us things about ourselves, things we wouldn't have learnt without that person, maybe, or even a karma of sorts. If she was just a dream...sweet dreams. Wink

A lovely read, dear poet

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit cascade,who knows


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Ok

what have u done with redshirt Ron? This guy is younger! (Tee hee hee)



~(:D)-

 

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lol,hell stella i had to wash

lol,hell stella i had to wash it,put it back on soon

you missed my 4 year old photo and my 19 year old military photo


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