Maybe

 



Baby !

i knew you,

long ago,maybe in a,

past life,i don` know.

 

maybe ,we was lovers,

lost at sea,

or stranded.on a deserted island,

off the coast of capri.

 

or maybe,

it was just in my mind,

maybe,just maybe

my heart was blind

 

but i smell your perfume,

and feel your soft skin

when the night is dark

my journey begins...

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bishu's picture

Nice read pal

Nice read


©bishu 

 

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thank you mr bishu

thank you mr bishu

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Beautifu. sue.

Beautifu. sue.

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thank`s sue

thank`s sue

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

A great way to take a concept

A great way to take a concept of past and memory and make it your own. I applaud the tempo you kept but most of all the differently worded way this was written. Like the perfume and touch taking you back, great job man, truly.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

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thank you for the great

thank you for the great review

patriciajj's picture

Wistfully romantic, silky and

Wistfully romantic, silky and gently flowing. Lovely work. 

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit

Dove's picture

Great Rhymes as always!

Great Rhymes as always! Smilez!!!

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you are jut to kind miss dove

you are just to kind miss dove

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Pretty Awesome! Love it!

 

From the moment our eyes met 

my heart skipped a beat

Although we were strangers 

I was giddy on my feet

That smile on you face 

told me everything I needed to know

We had kissed once before

perhaps in a picture show

 

When we shook each other's hands

the attraction was clear

But you didn't feel like a stranger

but someone I held dear

 

Perhaps in another lifetime

but it doesn't matter anyhow

When I gaze into your eyes

my souls happy you're here now

 

 

 

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well hell it`s better than my

well hell it`s better than my version...thank you for the visit

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I can so relate! It's

I can so relate! It's stirring within me again..  great write concise but fully loaded! Well done!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit

Cascade's picture

Sometimes in life we meet

Sometimes in life we meet someone that just feels so damn familiar.  It's happened to me. Some people call them twin flames, some, may be soulmates...I do believe everyone we meet can teach us things about ourselves, things we wouldn't have learnt without that person, maybe, or even a karma of sorts. If she was just a dream...sweet dreams. Wink

A lovely read, dear poet

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit cascade,who knows

allets's picture

Ok

what have u done with redshirt Ron? This guy is younger! (Tee hee hee)


 

 

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lol,hell stella i had to wash

lol,hell stella i had to wash it,put it back on soon

you missed my 4 year old photo and my 19 year old military photo