the church, under the milky way


 



the church,

under the milky way skies

as she strolls golden meadows

looking for more

 

stars winking,

as she looks, to the sky

 for the creator,

of love and life

 

she feels his presence

from clouds rolling by

as she stares

at the milky way sky

 

animals gather ,

to watch her pray.

as she walks

under the milky way

 

searching for the creator

to touch his face

with angels watching

singing amazing grace...

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sweetwater's picture

Lovely poem offering

Lovely poem offering beautiful images. sue.

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thank you sue,good to see you

thank you sue,good to see you

patriciajj's picture

You took us to a beautiful

You took us to a beautiful place here. Endearing images and enjoyable rhythm create a moment in heaven. Patricia

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thank you for reading

thank you for reading

SSmoothie's picture

Loved every twinkle it

Loved every twinkle it brought to my mind's eye. Beautiful soulful imagery! Thank you hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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thank you for the visit

thank you for the visit

Cascade's picture

I love the spirit of God and

I love the spirit of God and nature you weave in this wonderful piece of artistry.

The photo is beautiful and your words bring it to life

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thank you for taking the time

thank you for taking the time to read it.

 

roseblossoms's picture

Great Answer reply to the

Great Answer reply to the song! I

think its one of your best presentation!

 

Like the way the animals gather!

I have 3 cats that gather around

me at night to keep warm!

 

 

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thank you,and i have that

thank you,and i have that think there  children,,i wrote this in about 5 min didn`t edit yet but i`m glad you liked it

Starward's picture

Excellent poem in both

Excellent poem in both imagery and the message it delivers!


Starward

 

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thank you for the visit my

thank you for the visit my friend

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My pleasure!

My pleasure!


Starward