a moment in time


 



A moment in time

funny how it can

last a life time

 

A lost love

a first kiss

a moment in time

that you will always reminisce

 

Your first date

your first time

memories you keep

tucked away in your mind

 

Some times when your alone

you reminisce of all the memories

that you have known

 

You dream of all the things you miss

you wish you could go back in time

and re capture that moment in time...

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patriciajj's picture

You expressed that wistful

You expressed that wistful aching for the past with elegance and power. A beautiful presentation. 

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thank you pat

thank you pat

sweetwater's picture

Loved this, looking back is

Loved this, looking back is bittersweet at times. sue.

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lol,i think we`re made of

lol,i think we`re made of memories

Cascade's picture

See? We all disappear to

See? We all disappear to reappear Laughing. I LOVE that beautiful blue moonlit water

And your words very poetically relatable. Hold your candle to the sky, dreamer

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always,,thank you

always,,thank you

sweetwater's picture

Or a love you could not

Or a love you could not capture yet still it burns strong. Lovely poem. Sue.

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life is a mystery,thank you

life is a mystery,thank you for the review

Dove's picture

Nicely Done

Like the line:

“You dream of all the moments you miss“

 

If I could remember my dreams 

surely it would be my first kiss 

how you held me ever so tight 

in your pants something was amiss 

 

Somewhere in time a memory

 we all seem to reminisce

The first time our naked bodies met

that unforgettable sweet kiss

 

Alone the heart pining for love

youre the one who always slipped away 

Whilst I was in bed dreaming 

hoping you'd  would always stay

 

So I penned this moment

so frozen in my mind

A poem of how I miss you

Of our special first time 

 

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great poem dove,you need to

great poem dove,you need to post it

georgeschaefer's picture

and your first poem which

and your first poem which started the journey into literature. . .

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after 422,bout time,thanks

after 422,bout time,thanks